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Post by dante on Aug 17, 2006 23:32:08 GMT -5
Sweet! I was actually hearing Linkin Park when I read that! Since Linkin Park is the closest think to rap/rock. ;D Another Great job!
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Post by spyder on Aug 19, 2006 6:01:44 GMT -5
Well thanks again Dante! I'm really glad you like them. It'd be awesome if we could actually use them someday (Y'know, if we ever do plan to start a band)
Anyway, here's my attempt at a love/tragedy kinda song (other then Thorn In My Side that is lol). Hope you like it!
All I've Got Where are you? I'll find you. I need you. You're all I've...
Where are you? I'll find you. I need you. You're all I've got..
Your photo, Of all I have left to remind of the things I've done. No goodbyes,
Seeing your face light the sky, where darkness falls, Hear you voice so cool, like when you used call. My name out loud, How could I've been so stupid just to lose it all.
Why can't I just get this back to you?
Leave it now, Don't care how. I'm gonna get this back to you.
[Chorus] Where are you? I'll find you, And I need you. You're all that I have got.
Put it behind you, So some time you'll. Just give us another shot.
Oh where are you? I'll find you, I need you. You're all that I have got.
Shooting stars that crawl across the sky, Like that beaming smile that crawled across your face. Well I can see it now, And I remember how I like awake and watch drift away out of this place. I'm not letting all go now, I need to get it back somehow.
[Chorus] [Softer] Where are you? I'll find you, I need you. You're that I have...
[Return to Normal/Chorus]
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Post by charles finley. on Aug 19, 2006 6:06:02 GMT -5
Wow, SpyderManDude, These songs PWN!
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Post by The Pantheon Dragon on Aug 20, 2006 13:24:29 GMT -5
I think you mean own,Double C.But yes,a lot of these songs seem like they could be NB songs even.This last one kind of reminds me of Far Away.Sing more soon! ;D
LP
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Post by spyder on Aug 20, 2006 22:03:51 GMT -5
Yeah, except "Far Away" is far more awesome XD Anyway, glad you like them guys! I'll post more soon.
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Post by ADJLFanatic on Aug 20, 2006 23:33:08 GMT -5
You better. I envy you for writting awesome songs now.
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Post by spyder on Aug 21, 2006 5:47:50 GMT -5
XD I could see that was going to happen, anyway, here's another song I wrote in the past. It's called "Fall". It kinda focuses on more of a Rap/Rock style too.
Fall (You make me fall) Yeah! (<Held) Oh, I can see you there, Dressed in your heart of black... Yeah, and these little things I keep inside, The little things you won't take back... You're always trying to make me feel, (Cause you think you can) Trying to make me feel... (Like a broken shell, of a helpless man)
(See me fall!) You'll never know... (How I fall!) I won't let go... (I cannot fall!) I'm gonna rise through it all... Through fists and words, You make me fall!
[Chorus] Yeah we’re… Stumblin’ and trippin’, Screaming and dying. Making me fall, and now I am dying… Yet not letting go, Must rise through it all. You won't stop this until I fall...
Yeah, You wanna see me fall? (Well that is impossible) Can’t bring me down (Yeah, I am unstoppable) See my skills unwind (When you put me to the test) But as always, you’ll just end up like the rest Falling hard, and hitting the floor Falling hard (Yeah, and losing it all) Falling hard and (You make me fall…)
Yeah and you know that (Through all your deceit your lies, Y’know no one ever tries…) To talk to you… (Driving down the knife) Scream and call… Through these fists and words (You make me fall…)
[Chorus x2]
(Cannot fall!) Yet so to stand tall (Must not let go) You’ll never know (Now I fall!) And lose it all… (See me fall!) And rise back up through it all… (Before…) You, make, me, [fall! <held]
[Chorus #2 x2] Yeah we’re… Stumblin’ and trippin’, Screaming and dying. Making me fall, and now I am dying (dying)… Yet not letting go, Must rise through it all (all). You won't stop this until I fall (You won’t stop until I fall)...
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Post by charles finley. on Aug 21, 2006 17:14:55 GMT -5
Like Raffi said, I envy cho for writing songs now..XD
Haha, post more or I will have those Rabid Muffins attack cho in your sleep..XD
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Post by spyder on Aug 22, 2006 23:43:06 GMT -5
XD Well, I'm starting to run out of songs I've written word for, but here's one the nonetheless. It's a working progess so it probably won't be as good as the others.
Get Me Outta Here Yeah you fall in love yet, Fall apart. You mend a wound yet, Break a heart. You change a life yet, Ruin one more. You feel much better, But still feel sore.
You breathe it out yet, Can’t breathe in. Cause there’s no way out yet, You still came in. You yell it out yet, Don’t here your voice. You don’t want in yet, No you’ve no choice.
[Chorus] Get me outta here, Get me outta here, [Hold longer] Get me outta here. [Normal] Screaming! Get me outta here, Get me outta here, [Hold longer] Get me outta here. [Normal]
Yeah, you feel alright yet, Still feel pain. You think it’s over yet, It happens again. It all seems okay yet, Is not right. Your body has strength yet, You feel no might. You want it back yet, It’s gone for good. You can’t go on yet, You know you should.
[Chorus] [Guitar Break] Why can’t you get me out of here? Is there no way out? What am I doing here? What’s all this about? Makes me feel want to go insane, Makes me want to shout. [End Guitar Break]
Get me outta here, Get me outta here, Get me outta here, Get me outta here, [Hold longer] Get me outta here!
[Chorus x2]
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Post by Tales_ Fanatic on Aug 23, 2006 9:56:32 GMT -5
Dang Spyder. Those songs rock. ;D
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Post by spyder on Aug 24, 2006 21:45:39 GMT -5
Thanks Lloyd! I'm glad that everybody enjoys them. Who knows? You may even get to hear them one day XD Anyway, got a new one for yall...
Lifeline You look at me, and all you wanna see, Are the things that lie ahead. Like you have a vision, your own epitome, You keep on your mind, every little thing that I’ve said. But now you watch me, As I take this fall from grace. And I see that smile twist across your crooked, evil face.
As you show my fate, my life on the road ahead, Cause me more pain, leave me landing in dread. And there I lie, so sick of trying, Still searching (searching in my mind) Still searching for (this lifeline)
[Chorus] What I see, in the back of my mind, What I’ll be, when it’s all left behind. Lie to myself, saying that my fine, But tells me otherwise, on this life (this lifeline)
Blackened my soul is, Yet colour doesn’t define. And what you own, Can be me mine, yeah it will be mine. What I see can be (this lifeline)
Can’t face the truth, The truth has gone blind. Can’t face these facts, Displayed in my mind. Can see the end of (this lifeline)
[Pre-Chorus] Eternity can’t last forever, And never doesn’t always mean never. ‘Cause I know it’ll all be alright (someday/someday!)
[Chorus] x2
What I see, on this line. What I keep, close as mine. What I mean and define, What it shows, on this lifeline.
What I have, and what I know, What I hide and what I show. What I make, what I break, What I take back as mine (this lifeline) This lifeline! [Solo] – “Yeah!” (< Dubbed over guitar solo)
[Pre-Chorus/Softly] x2 [Repeat chorus to fade]
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Post by charles finley. on Aug 25, 2006 20:18:33 GMT -5
ITS SO PWNFUL! XD
Wow dude..Nice! Haha, Maybe one day I'll come down there and we could jam together! ;D XD
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Post by superdoglac on Aug 26, 2006 16:44:42 GMT -5
AWESOME! I look foward to having you on my iPod one day
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Post by spyder on Aug 29, 2006 21:53:36 GMT -5
XD Thanks guys! Anyways, here's just another random song I wrote a few days ago. Hope you like it!
Over and Done Over and done! Wallowing alone, Caught up in the pains of, Life’s daily drone. You can describe the pain, I feel, sitting alone here. You can’t explain disdain, In living a life of your own fear. It’s so hard to keep up, When you’re running on none. It’s hard to stay behind, And suffer watching everyone. Get ahead in life, while you sit behind. Harass you from the front, And take control of your mind.
[Pre-Chorus] When I finally break away from everyone. You will find me here, Over and done!
[Chorus] And without you here I find that I am over, Over and done (and done) I can’t explain this pain to anyone, As I lie alone, without you here (you here I find) That I am over, Over and done
Sitting without you here, Taking its toll. Falling from grace in fear, A life of another failed goal. Yeah, it’s never the same, But it always seems new. It’s always harder, Going on without you. Derailing my own path, Of what lies ahead. Doing the impossible, When I should be dead. But I must carry own, I’m trapped in the present, afraid of what may lay ahead.
[Pre-Chorus] [Chorus]
[Softer] (Done) Now I find that I am, (over) over, over and (Done) Can’t explain the loss to anyone.
Nothing can be sincere, As the world will fall in fear. Mercy shown upon none, Cause without you here I find that I am over and done… (Over and, over and, over and, Done!)
[Return to Normal] [Chorus]
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Post by charles finley. on Aug 30, 2006 0:52:13 GMT -5
Wow..just wow..*envies cho for stuffs again* XD
Dude, these songs are so PWNFUL I cant think of words to descride them..
*enives cho like 468479089657896895073 billions x schwags times 5690756092630923 more times* XD
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