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Post by spyder on Dec 6, 2006 0:51:45 GMT -5
lol Thanks Lloyd. That's what I'm trying to do XD
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Post by Tales_ Fanatic on Dec 6, 2006 15:40:03 GMT -5
XD, well you sure have a talent for it. Keep it up ^^
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Post by spyder on Dec 7, 2006 3:43:50 GMT -5
Thanks! I should hope so though, I mean, I do practice a lot and I'm going to need it if my band ever wants to be sucessful (cause quite frankly, we suck right now XD)
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Post by Tales_ Fanatic on Dec 7, 2006 15:45:34 GMT -5
XD, well if I ever came to Australia, (If that EVER happens, since my mom hates flying over water >> XD) I'd be interested in hearing that. XD
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Post by spyder on Dec 8, 2006 5:37:49 GMT -5
Well, for now I'm sure there are hundreds of places you can listen to a bunch of wannabe rockstar teenagers playing off key, noisy music XD
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Post by lildevil92 on Dec 9, 2006 7:50:54 GMT -5
^ Lol In Mi Neck Of The Woods there are tons of people who dream to be rockstars but can't play at all.
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Post by Tales_ Fanatic on Dec 9, 2006 14:52:00 GMT -5
Well, for now I'm sure there are hundreds of places you can listen to a bunch of wannabe rockstar teenagers playing off key, noisy music XD Yeah, I'm sure there is XD
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Post by spyder on Jan 11, 2007 1:07:03 GMT -5
lol
Well anyway, I was just looking through some of my songs and thought I might update this thread a couple more times.
Here is one I wrote called "Freeing The Soul" and it has a number of symbolisms and inspirations. It was originally based on a dream I used to have where statues would come to life at night (as in this dream there were spirits trapped inside their bodies that would escape at this time) and humans would take the form of statues, not being able to move.
I also saw this dream like it was a music video, with my band walking around the city wondering what had happened until eventually, I (being the singer) let out a heavy metal style scream and cracked all the stone covering the people, which freed them but when they came out onto the street where we were standing all they saw were statues (get it? XD)
So yeah, if we ever do become famous someday and make this song, I'd definitely made sure I suggested that as an MV possibilty XD
Anyway, I actually wrote it though at a completely different time. I hadn't had the dream for weeks, I was just lying in bed at about 9 in the morning, my parents had gone out and there was a full on storm going on outside; and yeah I was feeling really depressed at the time as though I had no life inside of me and I wanted to free the soul from within me and make it to a better place. Hence the name "Freeing The Soul"
Anyway...
Freeing The Soul These bars upon these, cracked and crumbled walls... Are all I see left of, outside to the real world... These grey ashes in the air, cover up in this bright blue sky... Cloud my thoughts with these questions, as I continue to wonder "why?" I lay, trapped forever, Broken down, and healed never... Is my spirit...
And as I look and see the rain pour down on me... It takes a lifetime, for me to finally see...
[Chorus] I was there when you were, vision impaired... Could not see the reason, written upon my face... And I was there, when you thought no one really cared... And picked you up when went down to lie in your disgrace...
And now these thoughts and memories... Continue to play with me... Through the prison walls, nobody ever sees... These monsters in our heads, kill us through our epathy...
But that’s okay, just as long as I feel alive inside.
[Chorus]
Well, these bars pon these, cracked and crumbled walls... Grow eyes upon their faces, watching me as I slowly fall... These dark clouds upon the air, Look down me as I lie awake in there... Still wondering "why...?" Still on my mind...
Yeah! < Screamed
[Chorus 2 x2] And I was there, when you were vision impaired (I don't want to be dead) And couldn't see the reason written on my face... (I just want to feel whole) And I was there when you thought that no one really cared... (I don't want to be trapped) And picked you up when went down to lie in your disgrace... (I just wanna free my soul...)
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Post by charles finley. on Jan 11, 2007 1:22:23 GMT -5
OMG. YOU UPDATED YOUR DYING THREAD. :fup:
Tis a nice song! *totally envies you* XD
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Post by spyder on Jan 11, 2007 19:59:55 GMT -5
XD Thanks
That's all I really have to say :fup:
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Post by amdragfreak7 on Jan 19, 2007 19:16:35 GMT -5
Dude, you totally rule all things lyrical. How do you do that? I could never right songs like that.
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Post by spyder on Jan 19, 2007 19:25:20 GMT -5
You know, I'm really not sure XD I just think about certain people, or things, or emotions, and basically, it just all sort of comes to me. Anyway, thanks though. I'm glad you like them!
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Post by spyder on Feb 14, 2007 6:27:37 GMT -5
So anyway, do you guys remember that song I did earlier Chasing Horizons, As Wel Fall? Well, if not, here's a little reminder. Chasing Horizons, As We Fall… i) NightmareBehind that mask,That second face you hide.I can't believe it's you. Staring down my wrist,Seeing the dragon's coil. Sending this cold heart,Through a twist of pain and toil. [Chorus] But then I see your face,Revealed to me. To now realise,We can never be. I cast aside this weapon, callous and unkind. Turn and run.Running away, To leave this nightmare, forever behind (forever behind)Yeah, as this mind spins, This body is still mobile. The disease wins,My spirit no longer noble Open up my eyes, And gaze within, but please...Don't be shocked with what you see. Take this soul right back, Because I still feel, like this soul.Is not a part of me anymore. [Chorus] [3rd Verse/Guitars Dye Down and Play Softly, Bass gets deeper and more soothing, Cymbals Played Softly in Background] As you give it all away, Wallowing alone. (Heart weakening, Mind wondering) < Scream Faded in BackgroundYeah, you give it all away Heart weaking, mind wondering. (How can I, do this?) < Scream Faded in Background You give it all away...To me (me)... < Scream Faded in Background[Returns to Normal Style] Yeah! < held[Chorus] x2 [As the Song Ends, the Electric Guitar slowly dies down and the sound of an Acoustic Guitar being played behind it grows clearer and clearer (The intro to the next song "Cure")] Anyway, I have the second part Cure finished now, so here it is. I hope you like it! Cure[Chorus] - Soft and Faded It’s not you, It can’t be. Cannot accept, Cannot believe. This cruel twist of fate. It’s you I can’t decide, Whether to feel, Love or hate. Paining words, Have sliced this soul. For, these cold-hearted acts, Will take their toll. [Chorus] x2 As my life lies in shreds, My mind ticks slow. Waiting to crack, Wanting to know. Why? Why did it have to be you? Forever wounded, This body bruised. My heart it bleeds, Untamed, misused. Torn, maimed, abused. [Chorus] x2 Looking to remedy. If I could somehow alter, My life’s own destiny. Just to have you here, Here with me. But it can’t be done, Leaving me in desperate need, For someone, to cure, Cure this tragedy. So yeah, what do you reckon?
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Post by charles finley. on Feb 15, 2007 1:14:51 GMT -5
jkl;fg ljkfdkjlslkgfkl;jrtjk!!!!!
Awesome!
*envies*
XD
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Post by ADJLFanatic on Mar 16, 2007 9:35:45 GMT -5
Awwww, lovey song. XD Hey, you know who you can dedicate this song to? ASHY. HAHAHAHA. Because... well... it's a love song... and like, you wrote it... and stuff. XD
You good writer person. Haha, I still remember Not 2 Scale. *pokes you* HAHAHA. I will eat you one day. I mean... HAHAHA join your "possible" band. XD
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