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Post by Chaos on Nov 5, 2006 3:01:10 GMT -5
Yush, now that Shade's Spooks is basically over and the secret is out! Heh, yeah. ^^ That's all, move along to the story!!! D:
Prologue: Sweet Dreams!
In the Spirit World, Shade was just floating there, eyes half closed from boredom. He was forced to be awake to watch a talent show, but couln't help but almost falling alseep with his head on his hand.
"Are you awake, sir?" A goblin asked, seeing Shade tired. He just quietly nodded, watching. Shade yawned loudly and continued to watch the nonsence happening on what this was of a talent show.
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Florence was watching Jake, Trixie, Spud, and Rose doing some tricks and apparently trying to entertain Florence, but falling over and doing horribly while Florence oddly watched.
"No, that piece of wood goes here!" Spud argued to Rose.
"Are you mad? We need it here to support the wall!" Rose replied.
"So what, the whole thing is gonna be a big wall?"
"SPUDINSKI!! What if Florence tossed a dime? The city would collapse! We need a wall!!" Trixie screeched.
"HEY!! Walls aren't important! The big structure of the city is most important!" implied an angry Jake at Trixie, making Rose glare at him. They were fighting over how to make their block tower from the little 5-year-old colored bricks, trying to entertain Florence.
"Oh sure, just take THAT block, it will definitely increase our wall strength!" Trixie sarcasticaly said to Spud. he pulled the brick out and the whole building collapsed as Trixie glared at him.
"WHAT!? You said to take it out!"
"SARCASTICALLY!!" angrily screeched Trixie, snatching the brick from his hand and throwing it at Spud. ALthought they were loud, it was pretty easy for Florence tp fall asleep on Spud's couch.
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Shade slightly grumbled as he fell off where he was sitting into the water. The goblins just oddly watched him and backed away until no one was where Shade was.
"M....hugglllsmmmm...." Shade murmured.
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Florence was now laying on the couch to the house of the fighting immature children.
"Mmmmmslllgguh....m..." She grumbled, falling on the cimplete brick tower.
"This is coming out you your pay check!" Jake yelled, pointing to Spud. He just glared at Jake.
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Post by charles finley. on Nov 5, 2006 3:03:05 GMT -5
"No, that piece of wood goes here!" Spud argued to Rose.
"Are you mad? We need it here to support the wall!" Rose replied.
"So what, the whole thing is gonna be a big wall?"
"SPUDINSKI!! What if Florence tossed a dime? The city would collapse! We need a wall!!" Trixie screeched.
^LOL! That line makes me laugh.
Tis a good start Ewan. I totally envy you again. *envies* XD
Update soons ma friend that's also part of the werido trio or w/e it is!
-Ash
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Post by ADJLFanatic on Nov 5, 2006 3:06:12 GMT -5
Riiiight. The Mmmhuugggllssss thing got me laughing. Shade and Florence are weird with a capital W. XD Nice chapter. It was SHORT. I wanted more. >>
Ah well. Update soon then. Tallieho! Or however you spell that! XD
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Post by kenny55 on Nov 5, 2006 3:18:53 GMT -5
You took the words right out of my mouth fanatic lol. Great story!
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Post by Chaos on Nov 7, 2006 0:18:30 GMT -5
Heh, thanks everyone. I could totally imagine the scene with the building blocks. XD And you'll be suprised at what happens later on. Before I actually spoil stuff, here's the first chapter. XD
Chapter 1: Take My Hand; Take My Life
Shade and Florence awoke in a cold place. Shade was in his normal, human form and just in his normal clothes, but not cold at all. The snow was flying from the sky as they simultaniously wandered the abandoned, barren wasteland where they where.
"Who's there?" Florence called out, squinting her eyes and waving out. Shade took notice of the calling out.
"Hello?" He asked to her, speding over and controlling the snow in his way to move past.
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Doo Dooo Doo I just can't help falling in love with you...
Wise men say Only fools rush in But I can't help falling in love with you
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"SHADE!!" Florence yelled out in shock and happiness, seeing his figure. She sped over, smiling widely. The next thing Shade knew was that he was on the snow, Florence piled on top of him.
"Aww... Florence..." gasped Shade as he caught his breath, smiling gracefully and wrapping his arms tightly around Florence, making sure not to let go.
"How, how did we get here?" questioningly asked Florence, getting up but still hugging Shade.
"Flo, i don't care how or why, I'm just glad we're together!" Shade admitted with love in his eyes. Florence merrily sighed and they kissed.
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Shall I stay Would it be a sin If I can't help falling in love with you
Like a river flows(Ooooh ooh ooh) To the sea So it goes(Ooooh ooh ooh) Some things are meant to be... Some things are meant to be
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Laying down, side by side and letting the snow cover them, Shade and Florence laughed a little.
"Heh, wow... Laying out in a blizzard and letting us be buried in the snow." Florence uttered, grinning. Shade took her hand and nodded, getting up. Simultaniously, they yawned and looked at each other curiously.
"Isn't this great? Like when we were at the beach?" Shade asked, laughing once more.
"Yeah, except snow... and no beach." explained Florence, smiling and falling on Shade's arms boredly. Shade lost his ballence as they once more fell into the snow and it piled up on their laps, as they laughed.
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Take my hand (Take my hand) Take my whole life too (Life too) For I can't help falling in love with you
Wise men say Only fools rush in But I, I can't, I can't help falling in love (Falling in love) With you (with you)
Like a river flows(Ooooh ooh ooh) To the sea So it goes(Ooooh ooh ooh) Some things are meant to be... Some things are meant to be!
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Shade sped up and controlled lots of snow to pile in just one direction and made some snow into water and whipped in his and Florence's name.
"Now I assume we'll sign it?" Shade asked Florence, letting her sign it first and closing his eyes, having his lips pass a big smile. Flo set her left hand to her hip and laughed a little, putting out her free finger to sign under their names.
"Now it's you, Mr. Polite." offered Florence, stepping aside and having the same pose as Shade. He slightly crossed his arms and then controlled some more snow to melt into water and sign his name on the snow pile.
"THERE, now we've officially signed our lurv." He announced, grinning and tackling Florence to the ground. She slightly screeched and slightly got up, try try and get off. Shade just controlled the snow around them in a box to turn into water. "Now, wouldn't want you to fall now, would we?"
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Take my hand (Take my hand) Take my whole life too (Life too) For I can't help falling in love with you
Take my hand! (Take my hand) Take my whole life too...! (Life too) For I can't help falling in love (Falling in love with you) with you!
For I can't help Falling in love Falling in love with you
Like a river flows That's the way it goes I just can't help falling in love with you
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Flo just looked around very suspisiously and started to slip down the ice.
"Uh.... Shade?" She oddly asked, looking down at the cold water.
"Yeah, we truly love each other!" Shade said, smiling widely and eyes closed, so he didn't realize Florence's falling down the ice slab into the freezing water he had conjured a little while back.
"Yeah, but..... help!?" immediately Florence announced as a call for help as her shoes touched the artic water. Shade sped his eyes open and glared at Florence in shock.
"Take my hand!" He yelled out. Florence made her right hand free as Shade took it and puled her up before the ice slab they were on collapsed upsaide down and they both flew into the water.
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Like a river flows That's the way it goes I just can't help falling in love (Falling in love) with you
Like a river flows That's the way it goes (Take my whole life too!) I just can't help falling in love with you
Like a river flows (I just can't help myself!) That's the way it goes (Take my whole life too!) I just can't help falling in love with you...
Like a river flows (Take my hand) That's the way it goes (Cause I can't help) I just can't help it, falling in love with you!.........
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Shade and Florence sped out of the water, even though they never actually felt the cold of the river. Their ears pirked up slightly as they looked around.
"I hear... Goblins talking to me..." Shade murmured, starting to fade from the artic area where they were.
"And I hear... Bricks falling and people arguing." explained Florence, laughing a little as she finally acknowledged that they were both vanishing. Before fully being gone, they both smiled and waved, uttering one last, 'good-bye'.
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Yush, that's all. Purtty nice? That's what I thunk. XDD Please just review. XP
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Post by ADJLFanatic on Nov 7, 2006 0:26:37 GMT -5
Awww, that song rules man. And this chapter... so teasy Shade and Florence are. *sings* Take my handdd... take my whole life too... for I can't help falling in love with youuuu. *people stare* AHHH! STALKERS! *runs* XD
THat was sho lurvey durvey booooo. So sweet! You know what they say, lurve rules all!
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Post by charles finley. on Nov 7, 2006 0:37:13 GMT -5
omgosh. I love pie. XDD
Tis nice Ewan! Update soons ok?XD
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Post by YFWE on Nov 14, 2006 9:28:36 GMT -5
Is this the one you wanted me to read, Ewan McGregor? Cause I did. >_> Anddd... it was like really good! ! XD There was the awkwardness with the song.. but that always happens to me when I read songfics, in my opinion. XDDD So uhhhh... update soon!
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Post by Chaos on Nov 15, 2006 11:04:49 GMT -5
Yay for a block week. XDD I know, I haven't updated this in a while, so I hope you continue to read this. That's purtty much all, again. :fup: Oh, and NUUUUU...... Kevin.... Yeah, you can read rthis, I meant read Time After Time. XP Meh longest fan-fic... Kinda a songfic though. :3
Chapter 2: Wakey Wakey! Look at the Block Model!
"Hey, Sleepy Toes. Wake up for I'll smack you with a rock." muttered a voice of a not-so-seeming-happy elf. Florence started to laugh, half opening her eyes.
"Toph, you and your nicknames." She laughed, rubbing her eyes before they were fully open. Toph scoffed a little and walked off behind the large pile of blocks the the group had been working on for a while. "Wow, this came a long way." Florence said, shocked and looking.
"Yup, it took all the time you were asleep.... And some help from Toph." Rose explained, laughing and scratching the back of her head. Florence oddly looked at her as this action reminded her of Shade, making her smile.
"What are you going to call it?" Toph curisouly asked, seeing a house collapse as she controlled it to go back up and reinforce.
"Well....." began Spud, setting his hand on his chin, tapping it in thought to what their large creation would be.
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"Why don't we call it Fortress Wen Kroy?" A man asked, wearing a black jacket, had pure white hair, seemed young, and brown pants that went over his feet.
"Oh, Wen Kroy! After our town, right!" Another man finally understood, also young, but tall. He wore a cap over his white hair, some sticking out. His clothes were a yellow shirt and jeans.
"Well, don't you want to make it seem more than just a fortress of our town?" asked a girl, who had her white hair in pigtails and fluffed up. She wore a casual green T-shirt and matching green shorts.
"It's fine, I like it!" bounded the final girl, her smooth, white hair trailing behind her back. In contrast to the tiny, white, block town that Jake and the others made, this was one actual city, and very large at the matter. But there was more to the city than you'd be able to tell....
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"Pst, Mary Ann." Spud whispered to one of his friends.
"For the last time, STOP CALLING ME MARY ANN!!!" Toph screeched in Spud's face, reaching that hight by raising earth under her to float up to him. He just nervously laughed and ran from Toph.
"I don't see why he does that to himself." muttered Jake to Rose.
"Yeah, but it's pretty funny if you think about it." She commented, smiling and putting her hands to his mouth.
"Heh, I guess you're right. Smart, but he'll never learn." Florence curiously watched Jake and Rose's conversation and looked at the block fortress again, oddly looking at it.
"Did you know this thing is white because it's glowing?" She then asked, confused at the illuminating fortress that got brighter and brighter each passing second. The others sped over to look at it, but Toph didn't really care and crossed her arms; she couldn't see anyway.
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"We'd better find a way to tell our boss about this new place. It'd also be good if we got families to move in." The first male began to suggest.
"Yeah, but we can work that out later once we've reported the naming and how it's complete and all...." The first female explained. The other male and other female just nodded.
"So then, we're off to the center room?" The long-haired girl asked, the three others nodding. They all walked out of the room they were in to move on to their next plan.
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"Eh, don't worry about the glowing." Trixie just said, waving her hands up and down like she was scared.
"Yeah, the scared Trixie is right. I think we should just leave it, like if we break it, it will come alive and eat us!" explained Spud, everyone looking at his very oddly. "It could happen...."
"Soooo..... I'm bored. Let's go train!" Toph announced. Everyone just nodded and stepped outside except for Florence.
"Coming Flo?" Rose asked before going outside, Jake behind her. Florence just slowly shook her head.
"I kinda want to just watch this fortress.... It's marvellous." answered Florence, sitting on the couch she had slept on and just gazing at the glowing castle. Jake just shrugged and they both went out to train with Toph and the others.
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And there you have it. I hope that Chapter 3 will have music, but I don't know. X3 I know, I said to Raffi there'd be moosic in the next one, but mayyyybeee not. We'll see, we'll see. XDDD
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Post by ADJLFanatic on Nov 15, 2006 21:21:53 GMT -5
Moosic must go onn. *shakes* XD
Interesting... WHAT HAPPENED TO SHADE, YOU BALOOKA. :fup: Yeah, I still wonder why.... Oh well. >.> NICE. I likie!!!!! Update soon!!!!
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Post by charles finley. on Nov 17, 2006 0:35:00 GMT -5
!! Sowwy I didnt see this update Ewaners. Update soons! lmao MARY ANN! XD
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Post by Chaos on Nov 23, 2006 13:52:54 GMT -5
NEEEWWW TITLEEE!!!! XDD The Secret Society, now known as this instead of Who in the Spirit World? for easier terms. TSS ish easier than WitSW. )_( Raaafffiiiii aaannnnddd Asshyyy are zapped!!!! XD Moving on, I wanna work on the first acton of the fan-fic, sho no song and it may be short, but it's action from the gang. ^^
Chapter 3: Toph's Vigorous Training
"Take my hand... Take my whole liiife too...." Florence hummed, smiling, thinking of Shade. She looked out the window and saw Toph leading the four originols of Team Dragon. "Wait up!" She called out, opening and then closing the window. Flo sped down the stairs of Spud's home and out the door.
"So Mary Ann, where are we going for this training?" Spud asked, putting his hands in his pockets. Toph rose her hand and moved some wrist motions, sinking his feet in the ground and raising it to follow them, floating sloghtly in the air.
"We are going, Dumber than Dumbo, to a rocky terrain, where I can tottaly beat you all. Teamwork, or a stroke of luck, to beat me." explained Toph, eyes closed and still moving.
"So... We'll be at some sort of cliff?" Rose curiously asked, wondering what the rocky terrain would be.
"Yeah, pretty much. There may be a slight advantage in my favor.... Slight." Toph muttered, smiling and shurgging a little and setting down the out of road feet now.
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"AAHHHHHHHIIIEEEE!!!!!!" screeching came from the five gang members avoiding Toph. Her slight advantage over the rocky field around them almost crushed all five of them under an avalance of pure boulder.
"Come on! You can do better then that!!!" Toph yelled at them all to improve their defence and work on offence.
"You're trying to kill us, it's not our fault we can't avoid all this!" yelled in reply Jake in Toph's yells. She scoffed in reponse and controlled rocks around them to rise and muddy water to go up above them.
"If Shade was here, he could freeze or move this water..." Florence muttered, grumbling and raising her hands over the muddy water before it sank back under. Jake turned his arms dragon.
"I'll be right back..." He muttered. Jake sped in the muddy water and smacked a hole in the rock wall as the water lowered for them to run away from more of Toph's attacks. He quickly turned full dragon and grabbed Trixie as they flew in the air. Many rocks attacked the others on the ground.
"Shade could make a frozen wall to block these rocks from attacking...." murmured Jake as Trixie slid off of his back in front of the falling rocks and pulled out her mp3 player.
"I am so glad this plays without the headset." Trixie gleefully said to herself, setting her music to full volume and the blasting music slowed the rocks down to a nonlethal speed. She stayed back as the others went ahead to chase Toph to a tunnel of earth.
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Continuing to follow the little elf in the seemingly pure black cave was even more of an advantage to Toph, she doesn't see with her eyes, so the others must follow her ways.
"I'm bliiineeeennddd!!" Spud screeched, covering his eyes, but still running in follow of the others.
"Spud, just keep running!" yelled Rose to Spud. He just slightly nodded as Toph smashed her hands on the walls of the tunnel as they collapsed behind Team Dragon when they continued to find Toph at the end of the tunnel.
"Toph could've been stopped with her earth control by now if Shade were here and pressure pointed her arms..." Rose groaned, kicking the wall of the tunnel.
"What is up with you? That's making it worse!!" shockingly inquired loudly from Flo, glaring at Rose.
"I'm gonna stop the other tunnel rocks from coming with these rocks, you all need to go on!" Rose demanded as the three remaining fighters hesitated before doing what she had forced. Before losing sight of Rose, they saw her kick the other side of the tunnel wall as she engulfed in darkness and the sunlight shone on them.
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"Very clever." Toph muttered, grinning. She stomped her foot and the tunnel behind them closed, completing the gap in the place they all were. It seems that while waiting for Jake, Spud, and Florence to arrive, Toph made a giant stadium, flat out of earth.
"Then let's dance." replied Flo as everyone was now grinning. Jake breated fire in his hand for a fire sword, lorence pulled out her Huntstaff, and Spud found a rock that looked like a club.
"I'll go first, heeYAAA!!!!" Spud shrieked, speeding to Toph with his rock club clentched in his fists. She simply controlled the rock club to dissolve from his hand and an earth hand to grab him and stop him in his tracks. "Awww....." He murmured.
"Come on Florence, we're the onl one's to fight Toph." Jake explained to Florence. They nodded at each other and now charged at Toph, blocking each swinging attack with risen rock from the ground.
"You can't beat me, you've lost your three others!" taunted Toph, grinning harder and putting all her focus to Jake and Florence, shooting earth at them. Jake could swish his tail to stop the rocks and Florence with her staff. Without notice, Toph fell from behind with an attack from a muddy water covered Trixie. She quickly got up and tried to attack her as Rose, dirt covered on her face and partly on her clothes, tackled her down.
"You get 'em!" Spud called out, laughing a little as Florence broke him free from the rocky hand with her Huntstaff.
"Ha ha, very nice everyone. Your teamwork led you to victory. Just remember that we need that for future battles." explained Toph, smiling and getting up. She got the muddy water off of Trixie and dirt off Rose.
"We'll make our leave now." brightly exclaimed Florence and Rose together. Jake, Trixie, and Spud nodded as they made their way back from the outskirts of New York.
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And there it is, ACTION!! XDD That's, again, all I really have to say, so just read and reply. X3
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Post by ADJLFanatic on Nov 23, 2006 14:02:00 GMT -5
Interesting. XDD
Hahah hum. Florence was humming the song I hummed today. Well, sang.. but.. same diff. Ahhh Flo misses Shade. But.. he can be helpfully handy in some times, true dat. >.>
Uhhhmmm... UPDATE SOON.
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Post by redemption on Nov 23, 2006 14:09:14 GMT -5
Hmmmm.... I like it. Very good. ^^
Update soon!
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Post by crazy17 on Nov 23, 2006 14:29:07 GMT -5
o.o Who the hell is Toph? I keep imagining her to be like Toph from avatar. Nice story!
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