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Post by Chaos on Jul 16, 2006 20:02:59 GMT -5
So, I thought of this when I was in Mexico, thios takes place in the Underwat City of Atlantis, no, that's not where Silver and Derceto work. You should really read my newest fan-fic to see what will happen, especially the last chapter.
Prologue: Letter Desciptions
"Alright, the letter says we must go to the Lost City of Atlantis to protect the mermaids from what they think is an attack on the city." Gramps said, reading the letter and going out to the docks again, as another bubble rose.
"YES!!! I get to be with mermaids again!" Spud yelled. Trixie kinda rolled her eyes as they all got in the bubble. But, unknown to them, Aqua, Saphire, and a tied up Josh the elf were already waiting in the city, in an abandoned building, plotting the downfall of the gang.
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Post by superdoglac on Jul 16, 2006 20:18:34 GMT -5
cool so far. When i read the title it made me think of the song "under the sea"
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Post by Chaos on Jul 17, 2006 3:39:55 GMT -5
Made me think the same thing... Chapter 1: Surf and Turf... Underwater!? "So, while we aren't protecting this place, and the people who aren't suposed to protect this place... What do we do for fun?" Trixie asked Gramps, already bored. Gramps just smiled, pointing to the mermaids all riding waves they let into the buble protection, like surfing. "Oh, snap!" Jake yelled outta curiousity. "AWESOME!!!" Shade yelled, running over and getting completely covered by a wave and damped. "HAH! Water is great fun." Shade muttered, grinning and riding some more waves on his dragon form stomach. Trixie just shrugged and found the closest hotel. "Yes, we should check in." Gramps suggested. Once the got all inside, Shade soaking wet, they all were in the fancy lobby. It was light blue, obviously, and filled with a few mermaids, servants, clerks, or guests. "Two double rooms please." Gramps said to the clerk, handing him a sheet of paper. The mermaid accepted it and nodded. "This way." He said, pointing to an elevator. They all got in as they reached the fourth floor, rooms 4443 and 4444. "Ok, Jake, Shade, Florence, and Rose, you all share a room. I'll stay with Fu, Spud, and Trixie." Gramps said, opening the door to room 4443. "So, we're gonna have to share a bed..." Jake muttered, pointing to Shade. "Florence and Rose share..." Jake continued, pointing to Rose and Florence. "Trixie and Spud?" Jake asked, turning to the front door of room 4443. "Yo, better than sleeping with Fu..." Trixie muttered. Spud smiled and nodded as Fu glared at them angrily, pulling his luggage into the room. They both also followed Fu into the room. "Yeah, our best thing with Rose and Florence! They will become our girlfriends in no time!" Jake bragged to Shade in a whisper when they were the only ones in the hall. Shade grinned and nodded as they entered the room. But they had no idea that their trust would be in turmoil the next day.
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Aquadragon
Mythobiologist
~Find the true dragon within you~[ss:American Dragon | Season 2]
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Post by Aquadragon on Jul 17, 2006 3:56:17 GMT -5
kool story Shade awesome keep it up ;3
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Post by Chaos on Jul 18, 2006 1:37:15 GMT -5
Thankies! :3 I'm trying to work on this as quick as I can... Kinda. There's gonna be a lot of kisses... But mostly surprise kisses. ^^ I like surprises.
Chapter 2: What's With Spud and Trixie?
After everyone walked down and out of the hotel for dinner, Trixie realized she left one of her hair pins in her room, so she sped back into the suite.
"Man, hope we actually make it to breakfast in time..." Spud muttered, rubbing his stomach as it quivered with hunger. Jake and Shade just laughed, walking with Spud to the nearest diner. Gramps, Rose, and Florence were explaining what they knew about the Huntsclan in case they were attacking the city in a secret and disclosed area.
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Fu, Shade, Jake, and Spud found some seats and sat in them.
"Oh, don't forget another chair for Trix." Spud reminded Jake. The waitress heard and nodded, swimming over and grabbing another chair and setting it over. When Trixie finally returned, she looked really serious and walked over to the seat next to Jake, but didn't sit down.
"Hey, Trixie, I got you a lemonade as a drink, that ok?" Jake asked Trixie, who just stared into Jake's confused eyes. She grabbed Jake's hair and pushed his heasd closer to his so that they kissed, and she sped off, letting go of Jake's hair. He just looked at everyone in shock and wiped his mouth with a cloth, not blinking.
"Wh-Who was that???" Spud asked, even more confused and saddened than Jake. Spud sighed and walked out of the restaurant in a sulk.
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As they finished breakfast, without Spud or Trixie Jake and Fu left the diner, but Shade noticed Trixie walking in after finishing his last orange juice, letting everyone else leave before him.
"Trixie, we need to talk." Shade aid sternly to Trixie, grabbing her arm and storming out of the diner as they went into the the actual city bit of Atlanis.
"But, I never got to drink lemonade or even order..." Trixie muttered, wide-eeyd and sad that she didn't get to eat that day. They were both walking down the street, and when Shade was about to say something, Trixie intterupted and pointed to Spud down the lane, saying, "Hey, look, it's Spud!"
"Yes, yes it is. And now, Trixie, I want to tell you..." Shade muttered, seeing that Trixie was staring down the lane in shock. Shade waved his hand in ront of her face once or twice until he turned around, seeing that Spud had held a mermaid woman's chin, because his hand was still on her chin, and was kissing her. Spud just glared at Trixie and Spud, running off. When Trixie finally realized Spud had gone, Trixie had yelled,
"Spud, wait!! What was that for!!??" And running to try and chase him. Shade sighed and shook his head, asking himself, "What is wrong with Trixie and Spud?..."
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Post by ADJLFanatic on Jul 18, 2006 2:40:58 GMT -5
Ooooh... interesting. ^^ Awesome chapter, no wait... awesome STORY. ;D Heh, I love it. Sorry if I never got to review it...hehehe. But I always forget. Bad Raffi! >.< Update soon.
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Post by Chaos on Jul 18, 2006 21:51:10 GMT -5
Thanks a lot! *whips Raffi* Yes, bad you! Jay Kay! Well, finally have chance to update, so here ya go, mare lovey-dovey! ^^ Chapter 3: Bad Ol' Rose "What are you talking about, I never kissed Jake!" Trixie yelled at Shade as they were in the lobby chairs in their hotel. "Yes, you did! And even though it wasn't right, Spud took his revenge out by kissing a random mermaid..." Shade muttered, sighing a little and opening a water bottle to control the water for no reason. "I'm telling ya, Fu, I saw you running past and kissing some girl elf tourist!" Jake insisted to Fu Dog, who had just entered with Gramps. They were all back from their dragon training, Spud was in the hotel room, and Florence and Rose were out shopping. "Well, I'm going out to shop with Trixie and Spud, they want to get souveneirs before the attack." Jake said to Gramps, Fu, and Shade. "Anyone else comin'?" Jake asked. "No thanks, I need some peace and quiet in the room to work on my newest novel. I'll get Spud on my way up though." Shade said, speeding into the elevator for floor 4. ----------------------------------- After Spud, Trixie, and Jake had all gotten out of the hotel, they entered a souviner shop that was close by the hotel. "Ooh, this has some fly skateboard wheels... Wait, that's real creepy for mermaids to be selling this..." Jake muttered, his eyes geting wide with fear. He bought them to the clerk as Trixie and Spud were standing next to each other, looking at stuff. When their hands touched to get something, they looked at each other, but then turned away in anger. Spud had noticed Rose walking in and smiled, walking over. "Hey Rose, where's Florence?" Spud asked Rose, bored. "Back." Rose said sternly, putting her arms around Spud's neck and getting closer to him. "Um, what are you doing?" Spud asked, confused. Jake, having bought his wheels, walked over to where Trixie and Spud were, to see Trixie surprised at her sight. When Jake turned to see, he was in shock and sadness when he saw Rose was kissing Spud. (Ooh, R/S fans rejoice. ^^) Rose just glared at Jake and trixie, especially Jake, and sped out of the shop. "Oh, boy! I told you she was evil!" Trixie yelled into Jake's ear who had a tear in his eye but closed his eyes and walked out of the shop. "Well, that's two mistakes you've made." Trixie said to Spud, glaring at him before leaving the shop behind Jake. "But SHE kissed ME! You were the one who kissed Jake!" Spud yelled out in anguish, speeding out of the shop and chasing them down. He groaned a bit as they walked toward the hotel. (I know, a short chapter, but I'm in a short mood. Then again, I'll always be small, until I get older... Hopefully. )
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Post by gojake on Jul 18, 2006 22:01:08 GMT -5
update i am dying plz i am dying
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Post by superdoglac on Jul 18, 2006 22:02:39 GMT -5
Haha! When I read the chapter title I knew something was up!
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Post by gojake on Jul 18, 2006 22:04:45 GMT -5
oh, and is it just me, or does spud seem a little smarter
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Post by Chaos on Jul 18, 2006 22:07:17 GMT -5
Yes... I don't know why I keep making his seem smarter than he really is. Huh... I'll try some stupidity in the next chapter, I just have writer's block. You probably won't find out the reason of the turmoil in the sotryline until I make it obvious. ^^
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Post by ADJLFanatic on Jul 19, 2006 1:15:51 GMT -5
Yeah.. grrr to that. XD Awesome chapter. Loved it. ^^ But everyone's going separate directions... Spud and Rose... Jake and Trixie. What's next?!?!!? XD Can't wait to see what happens next! Update soon!
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Post by Chaos on Jul 19, 2006 2:14:41 GMT -5
Better yet, I'll update now. And you need to see this to understand it... I mean, it won't be anything like you think. -_^
Chapter 4: The First Assault
"AAHHH!!! They're coming!" A mermaid yelled, swimming as fast as she could away form the giant shadows as mermaid soldiers ran near the bubble in case it were to pop for the enemies to get in.
"Ok, everyone, except Shade, who can use water to filter out the air in the water, take this." Gramps said, handing everyone a small thing of potion. They swalleowed it, it was just like water but was able to let them breathe underwater. "Remember the douplegagner teqhniques and fire won't work!" Gramps yelled, turning dragon. Jake and Shade did the same thing and sped out of the bubble, popping it and fly-swimming toward the large shadows.
"Ok, let's go!" Rose yelled to Florence, ready for battle. She punched the bubble and also made a hole for her and Florence to get into the water and swim up with the dragons.
"Alright, we stay back, and if we need you two, I can give you some magic BI." Fu said to Trixie and Spud as the water got up to thir knees. The elf woman tourist who 'Fu' kissed swam past and looked at Fu, blushing. Fu groaned a bit as he watched the five giant shadows approach Atlantis. They were two Kraken and three giant jellyfish.
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The Kraken yelled loudly as Rose anf Florence looked at each other, grinning and charging at the Kraken. They tried to push off the floor to attack the Kraken, but the water made them go over slow.
"Ah! The water is making us go slow..." Florence muttered, kicking the Kraken in the eye as it grabbed it's face in anger. Rose laughed as Florence kicked the Kraken. She swam up to one of the two Kraken's heads and pulled it's ears really hard as she swam away before the Kraken swatted it's hand into it's head liek Rose was a fly. Rose and Florence swam back into the bubble, next to Trixie and Spud, who were next to Fu.
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"Ughn.. Giant... jellyfish..." Shade said, staring at one of the three jellyfish in worry. Jake looked over at Shade as Gramps flew over to the jellyfish in front of him, and when the jellyfish thrust a tentacle at Gramps, it faded and went back into the real Gramps, who was behind the jellyfish and using a doupleganger. The real Gramps ran and sratched at the jelly-like head of the jellyfish as it deflated and fell to the bottom of the ocean.
"Bad experience with jellyfish?" Jake asked Shade as he nodded with fright. Jake sighed with sadness for Shade, but noticed he was ready to fight. Shade just clapped his hands together and blowing ice at the jellyfish's tentacles. They all froze over as Shade used his wtaer power to send a rush of bubbles and water to send the jellyfish flying back super fast.
"Ooh, nice effect." Jake said, smiling at Shade and easily grabbing the tentacles of the jellyfish that were sent at him and swatted the other groups of tentacles with his other hand. Jake just grinned and swatted the jellyfish's head with his tail as he let go of the tentacles and it sped off in worry. Jake laughed a bit as he, Shade, and Gramps flew back to the bubble.
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"Um... Why were there freakishy GIANT jellybobs in the water?" Spud asked Fu, who just rolled his eyes. Now it was time to relax... But only for the rest of that day, more surprises will tear apart Team Dragon.
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Post by ADJLFanatic on Jul 19, 2006 3:32:02 GMT -5
Jellybobs... XD That made me laugh for some reason. Ohhh, thank goodness for Spud and his stupidityness. >_>
I love you for your fast updatingness. ;D :fup:
Anywaaay... update soon. Can't waaaaiiiit. Chapters are great as always. ^^
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Post by gojake on Jul 19, 2006 8:39:34 GMT -5
yay another update this story rocks i wanna see how badly rose is reallly pissed of at jake
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